I just finished reading the book “bad pets” by Allan zullo. The book has a lot of funny short stories that are really interesting. Some of the stories that I found interesting was one about an eagle that thought a jet was a giant bird. The eagle dropped its fish on the jetliner because it thought it was a giant bird. Another story that I found was interesting in the book was when horse. That horse went out of its den because it was hungry and it went in to it Nabor for the apple tree and the horse got drunk of the apples and landed in the shallow part of the pool.it stayed there until the owner of the pool took a look out the window to see a horse .so the owner of the pool called the firefighter. The firefighters built a ramp .while they building the owner of the pool fed him the apples that he got drunk of.
Dear siraj,
ReplyDeleteNice rj, but next time just try to make it a little longer.
some Questions:
What were your reading strategies.(before after during)
what was the name and author of the book.
Were are all the literary elements.
Maor shaaltiel
Dear Siraj,
ReplyDeleteGreat rj I loved it but, I think you should make it longer and make predictions but since your are new its ok.
What were some text features?
Who are your favorite characters?
if you make a prediction what whould it be?
William Araque
Dear Siraj,
ReplyDeleteyou put good details in your story,but other readers journals ive seen were longer than yours next time you might wanna work on how long it is.
Anyways do you know why the author wrote these short stories?
Why do you love these short stories?
Did you make predictions before you started writing?
Elijah Limage